Monday, January 11, 2010

Revision Time

So I think I’m ready to dive in. So far I’ve made copious notes and I’ve thought long and hard and I’ve had ideas about what to do. It is going to be a full overhaul. But as of yet I haven't touched a thing. I'm one of those people that stand on the beach for a long time before getting into the water. But when I do go in, I get wet all at once.

This is where Scrivener comes in. Scrivener allows me to easily separate a document into many different documents and also fuse the documents back together. Originally when I wrote the book it was separated into chapters. I wrote it in scenes and then pasted scenes where I felt  they belonged. Usually it was more fussing than that, but the fussing was because of my imperfect writerly brain and less about the Scrivener program. So when I sent it off to my readers, I fused the whole thing together. One grand document of 56,877 words. Well, now my plan is to take a big scene from the center(a flashback that will no longer be such) and place it in the beginning and then weave through backstory. Separating by chapters will be less helpful than tracking the threads of backstory through present moment. I’m trying to imagine how this will work in the Scrivener program. I’ll keep you posted as to how this all works out. How do you all sort through this kind of thing?

I am sometimes amazed at my own blindness to the mechanics of novels. I’m a duration reader. I read for the pleasure of giving in and giving up. I always feel that I should be able to do this with writing as well. I think I have a new years resolution about this. What were they anyway? Oh, where is John Gardner when you need him?

As Always (today I start revision in earnest, tomorrow blog business),
Tina

14 comments:

  1. I don't have Scrivener, but I hear that it is great for this sort of thing. I use the paragraph feature in word to seperate different levels of writing, and it is extremely useful when revising. And it creates a wonderful outline on the side of my screen.

    Good luck with the revision!

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  2. That sounds like a cool program!
    I'm doing the opposite, blogging today and finishing my revisions in earnest tomorrow. I'm in the homestretch, but have ignored it for three weeks due to holidays. I gotta git 'r done!
    Good luck!

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  3. Kelly and Heather: I love Scrivener so I highly recommend it. But it sounds like Heather doesn't need it. I'm supremely jealous when folks seem to be organized. I am a mess after I have this many words down. Good luck to you both as you get back to work (Heather, I just read this on you blog).

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  4. I oughta try this Scrivener thing.

    Good luck with the revisions.

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  5. PMM, You seem like one of those organized people, so I'm not sure you need it. I still recommend it, 'cause it's fun. I think the revs. are going okay so far...

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  6. I've not heard of this program -- but might check into it. I sometimes get lost in the revision mess and have trouble keeping it all organized. It's just so much, you know?

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  7. Hmm. I think I need this NOW.

    I wrote my last ms in seperate chapter files, then smooshed them all together.
    The new one I wrote in scenes, and now I'm going through and shuffling them all together... cut and paste style.
    Yeesh.

    -Thanks for the follow, by the way ;)

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  8. Tess-I'm thrilled to have let you know about something! I always learn things from your blog.

    Lily Cate- I love your name. Try Scrivener, you'll like it. And right back at you!

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  9. Tina, I'm totally in love with Scrivener, so you can imagine how I felt when I read your post. :)

    I find it visually more enjoyable to use, and I totally like the sidebar: you see all the chapters, which are broken down by scenes (I titles mine), and you can then move your scenes from one place to another just by dragging them with your mouse.

    Aaaah, pure delight! :))

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  10. Nathaliemvondo: That is a cool idea. I've never broke my novel down further than chapters (my novel covers 24 hours and there are not a lot of clearly separate scenes. But conversations could be titled and moved around, and so could flashbacks. I'd still have to mess with that transitiony stuff, but...

    Thanks for the comment!

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  11. I've never heard of Scrivener, I write in word, but then I'm not a professional writer like some people here :) Good luck!

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  12. Hi, Charlie. Scrivener is really good for big projects. It doesn't do all the things that a word processing program does, so I still need one(and Word is it). Scrivener's beauty is in the organization.

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  13. I am so sure I posted a comment to this post and it's not here. Weird. Maybe I thought I was all done and xed out.

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  14. Anita, Hmm? Well, this counts. Thanks for visiting twice.

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